Order 66. Another Side, Another Story – Chapter 2. Revelation, Part 1

Chapter 2. Revelation

Part 1. A Rough Landing

The ship flew at great speed. It was beginning to burn up in the atmosphere.
“R5, if we survive this we’ll be close to the Temple… I feel, like the shadow of our enemy has revealed itself.” The ship zoomed past many roof tops, scraping them. Then he saw it. The Temple was in flames. “But, who?!” The ship was meters from a landing platform, but shot over it. Smashing the bottom of the ship, it began to fly further, then finally smashed into another platform and skidded into a building wall. “Oof… Well this wasn’t my most graceful landing, wouldn’t you say, R5?” Jordan waited for a reply from the little droid , but it did not come. “R5… Well, I can’t worry about this now.” He ignited his blue lightsaber, cutting a hole in the roof of his ship and Force jumped out. He looked up at the smoking ruins of the Temple. “My friends…”

It took him a while but he found his way to what was left of the Temple. “All these Jedi… Dead…” Jordan kneeled down next to a Youngling lying outside of the Temple. “How did this happen so fast? Is anyone else alive?” He then felt it. Another disturbance in the Force. “If I remain here I will die, but I must do what I can.” Jordan looked around, then hid in a concealed area. He sat down and began to meditate, knowing something would happen soon…

Jordan realized he was a threat to the others. “I must leave. The Sith will be drawn to me. I must leave and I will do what I can to fight the Sith,” he said to himself. Jordan walked off, back to his ship’s crash site. It was damaged beyond repair. He entered the building he had crashed into through the hole caused by his ship. It appeared a Republic hangar, containing several starfighters. Most of them appeared to no longer be in working condition. Jordan looked for the nearest flyable spaceship he could find. Luckily a few Jedi starfighters remained. He hopped into the cockpit, but just sat there with his head slumped down. The deaths of all the Jedi came crashing down on him… Then he hit the thrusters.

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Introducing Order 66. Another Side, Another Story


Ever since a group of shoes held a birthday party a long, long time ago (though in a galaxy not that far away) a little boy’s appreciation for creation was born. And so, throughout the following years shoes partied, a dinosaur travelled through time, oddly shaped football players went on adventures, a young wanderer became a knight, a comedian rose to godhood, Jedi fought an evil empire, a war between cyborg warlords and human-insect hybrids engulfed the world… The boy had learned how with only words on paper (and from times to time a few pictures) he was able to bring people, places, even entire worlds to life. By now that little boy has reached almost the third decade of his life and his love for telling stories has not ceased. And finally, long after he had planned to, he has decided to share these stories with the world. Whether you are a new or already familiar face: welcome to this little archive of mine! This is a place where I will, finally, actually be sharing my writing with others. It will feature pretty much anything I feel like sharing, both old and new stories, fan-fiction and original content, and probably some non-fiction added in at times. So, if you like reading, writing, stories (or me ^_~), drop by, drop a comment (I can’t promise I’ll get back to you quickly, since I’m horrible at that, but I’ll do my best) and, drop it like it’s hot. … Sorry… ^_^; In any case, I hope you’ll enjoy yourself and I look forward to seeing you around!

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Who? Just your average descendant of two sea-faring peoples, recently graduated anthropology Master and aspiring author with a life-long passion for writing.

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