Order 66. Another Side, Another Story – Act II: Chapter 4. Walking on the Edge, Part 3

Chapter 4. Walking on the Edge

Part 3. Desperate Measures

Bultar couldn’t help but feel worried with Vhiran’s sudden decision, especially after seeing him look at her like he just did. Something was, just not right. “Vhiran, please be careful.”

I will,” Vhiran said and as he turned around and walked to the exit of the cave, he could just see Shamila sitting down and lean against Nillanthir. ‘Nillanthir,’ he started speaking through the Force, so that only Nillanthir could hear it, as he exited the cave. I’m going to Coruscant. I had utmost faith Jordan would succeed, but now I can’t just sit here and wait to see if Nor-Ca will succeed. Please don’t try to stop me. There’s too much at stake. And don’t tell the others about this, especially Bultar and Shamila. At least not until my long absence gets suspicious.’ He halted for a moment to look back over his shoulder at the cave and smiled. Take care and may the Force be with you all.’ Vhiran then continued his way to the Lancet.

Nillanthir felt great sorrow inside. He knew he shouldn’t have let Jordan go. You lazerbrain! Nillanthir thought to himself. Now you have Vhiran coming for you… I don’t want to cause Bultar and the others grief by telling them the truth. Nillanthir was often good at hiding his emotions, but Shamila looked into his eyes and knew something was up. Nillanthir noted this and silently cursed himself for thinking too much, but he knew that the others would know the truth. Nillanthir looked to Bultar who was only staring out to where Vhiran left to get the Lancet. I have to do this…, Nillanthir thought then he got up and started to walk to the direction Vhiran was at.

Where are you going?” Shamila asked.

There is something I must do. Wait here for me,” Nillanthir said then he quickly dashed out to catch up with Vhiran.

It didn’t take him long to find his friend. “Hold it!” Nillanthir called. Vhiran simply stood still and turned to face Nillanthir.

Don’t try to stop me. I have to do this. For Bultar’s, Jordan’s and your sake,” he said.

There is something I have to do, but you must be able to help me. I can break the connection Bultar and I have… But I’ll need your help in it,” Nillanthir replied and he looked at Vhiran’s eyes, hoping to find a positive response.

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Introducing Order 66. Another Side, Another Story


Ever since a group of shoes held a birthday party a long, long time ago (though in a galaxy not that far away) a little boy’s appreciation for creation was born. And so, throughout the following years shoes partied, a dinosaur travelled through time, oddly shaped football players went on adventures, a young wanderer became a knight, a comedian rose to godhood, Jedi fought an evil empire, a war between cyborg warlords and human-insect hybrids engulfed the world… The boy had learned how with only words on paper (and from times to time a few pictures) he was able to bring people, places, even entire worlds to life. By now that little boy has reached almost the third decade of his life and his love for telling stories has not ceased. And finally, long after he had planned to, he has decided to share these stories with the world. Whether you are a new or already familiar face: welcome to this little archive of mine! This is a place where I will, finally, actually be sharing my writing with others. It will feature pretty much anything I feel like sharing, both old and new stories, fan-fiction and original content, and probably some non-fiction added in at times. So, if you like reading, writing, stories (or me ^_~), drop by, drop a comment (I can’t promise I’ll get back to you quickly, since I’m horrible at that, but I’ll do my best) and, drop it like it’s hot. … Sorry… ^_^; In any case, I hope you’ll enjoy yourself and I look forward to seeing you around!

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2 comments on “Order 66. Another Side, Another Story – Act II: Chapter 4. Walking on the Edge, Part 3
  1. Jordan says:

    Hey man it’s Jordan from the EJO it’s cool to see this!

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